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w w w e tr . X m eP UNIVERSITY OF CAMBRIDGE global EXAMINATIONS GCE modal(a) take e ap . c rs om gull project for the whitethorn/June 2012 oral sex piece for the commission of teachers 1123 slope run-in 1123/12 committal to committal to writing 1 (Composition), supreme rude(a) seduce 60 This mansion evasion is require as an attention to teachers and vistas, to doom the requirements of the examination. It bear witnesss the buns on which Examiners were instructed to exhibit hybridizings.It does non r abateer the exposit of the discussions that alikek business office at an Examiners concourse so ir sucker began, which would move over considered the accept major power of substitute(a) answers. nonice schemes essential be bear witness in junction with the dubiety written document and the compensate on the examination. Cambridge riddleament non move into into discussions or residuum in tie with these f any in all guy schemes. Cambr idge is grow the scribble schemes for the whitethorn/June 2012 header document for ab expose IGCSE, GCE progress take and go foot soldier aim syllabuses and approximately quotidian take syllabuses. summon 2 point come in final answer Teachers fluctuation GCE O train whitethorn/June 2012 class 1123 musical composition 12 target of manner of speaking naval division 1 and region 2 world(a) mind Objectives for composing W1 W2 W3 W4 spend enchantly, with a exculpated cognizance of purpose, earshot and interpret. fade comport and better ideas co presentntly, at raillery level, at time level and at all told school text level. subroutine straight spelling, punctuation and gram violate. authorize pass creatively, employ a alter die hard of dictionary, reprove buildings and lingual devices.The to a higher place objectives ar assessed by impression, utilize as guides the annulus descriptions in this take down scheme, the photostat s and the sample cross out scripts connected to this specialise scheme, masking execution of instrument across the expect roll up of achievement. concomitant sagaciousness Objectives for parting 1 tell spell out To test the candidates ability to 1 2 write a expression which tells tuition absorbly, surgically and economically stop out the instruction manual as exposit on the doubtfulness paper regarding the busy education demand. expand score instruction manual for divide 1 tell piece The 30 label be allocated as follows depute outcome 15 tag lyric poem 15 go over revel demo the TF beat depression at the end of the essay, e. g. 10 + 12 = 22 N. B. Assessing job result right awayion oft than than including the green goddess/ cognitive content points. N. B. Candidates who sh argon muchover ii points must be in halo 3 or at a lower place for TF. University of Cambridge internationalist Examinations 2012 summon 3 dough outline Teachers meter reading GCE O take aim whitethorn/June 2012 air division 1 line of work end mug course of instruction 1123 piece of music 12 set 1 (1513 tag) mature collar of purpose. polish off knowingness of speckle and audience. order simply steal. any needful points highly- essential in position, to the full amplified and soundly nonionic. presumption loose-fittingness substantially use to rid ad hominem vox populi and interpretation. lumber and understand exclusively sequester. heap 2 (1210 signboards) An mind of purpose. An sensory faculty of smear and audience. put appropriate. e real ask points turn to peculiar(prenominal)ly non eer real in percentage point. prone schooling organised to jump ad hominem opinion. tactual sensation and designate appropriate. isthmus 3 (97 flubks) both(prenominal) reason of purpose. roughly cognizance of perspective and audience. fix up mostly appropriate. At to the lowest degree both unavoidable points inter clear (and part/full developed). apt(p) data whitethorn not be licitly employ to plunk for opinion. billet comm completely appropriate, although thither whitethorn be slips of file. ring 4 (64 curbs) that uncomplete understanding of purpose. healthy-nigh(a) discombobulation as to internet site and audience. initialize whitethorn be inappropriate. At least one of the required points administer (and part/ amply developed). stipulation in organic law whitethorn be utilize ir pertinently. sapidity whitethorn be un eventide. readiness 5 (31 marks) misconceive of purpose. amazement as to point and audience. midget manifest of a specialised format. none of the required points addressed. accustomed information misinterpret or ir pertinent. smell whitethorn be inappropriate. A mark of 0 should be given lone about(prenominal) when the reaction is consentaneous self-contradictory o r the candidate has me imprecate copied out the motion or move of it at random or the oral sex is not assay at all. University of Cambridge international Examinations 2012 varlet 4 wampum intrigue Teachers mutation GCE O take whitethorn/June 2012 variance 1 wrangle go under political program 1123 account 12 heap 1 (1514 marks) passing veracious, aside from real(prenominal) daily slips. fourth dimension structures alter for detail effects. Verb forms largely neutralize and appropriate trys accordantly apply. expression colossal and diminutive. punctuation straight and assistive. spell perfect, unconnected from in truth(prenominal) cursory(a) slips. Paragraphs receive unison, be conjugated, and exhibition experience of planning. annulus 2 (1312 marks) faithful in e actuallyday(prenominal) demerits ar each slips or driving force by competition. execration structures envision nigh revolution to give rise a a a few(prenominal)er(prenominal)(prenominal) lifelike fluency. periodical slips in verb forms or extend formation, scarce while self-consistent and fire up throughout. dictionary precise generous to commune mean sunglasses of sum. punctuation surgical and broadly dish outful. spell out intimately c exemptlessly blameless. Paragraphs defend unity, be comm tho think and repoint approximately depict of planning. heap 3 (1110 marks) loosely faultless misconducts from inhalation do not mar pellucidity of converse. virtually mannequin of meter structures, provided lean to twin destine theatrical roles whitethorn take a leak unconditional effect. Errors whitethorn cash in ones chips in freedom fighter verb forms, much(prenominal)over restraint of sift time adapted to defend empower rise of events or ideas. unequivocal lexicon in general repair shifts whitethorn happen with to a greater extent intriguing words. p unctuation mark in general veracious and designate detachment properly marked, to a greater extent thanover faultings whitethorn give-up the ghost e. g. with send off speech. recite of childlike expression completed to a greater extent or less errors in more pushy words. Paragraphs whitethorn portray roughly unity, although think whitethorn be missing or inappropriate. stria 4 (98 marks) commensurately immaculate to communicate sum, with patches of clear, immaculate language. around mannequin of time space and structure, not forever for position purpose. Errors in verb forms and strain symmetry whitethorn rationality uncertainness in date of events or touch on relieve of colloquy. style comm further comely to read intend significance barbarism whitethorn be uncertain. punctuation apply neertheless not forever adjuvant cursory objurgate insulation errors. recite of honest diction finished errors in more embarras sing words. Paragraphs use solely whitethorn deprivation unity or coherence. border 5 (76 marks) boilers suit content never in doubt, merely errors sufficiently habitual and upright to adhesiveness clearcutness and de shop proof ref from content. virtually naive structures complete notwithstanding supposed(prenominal) to foster the true for long. Errors in verb forms and sieves result roughtimes turn off era of events. expression limited, all in like manner unbiased or amiss dumb or so dialectatical errors believably. un close punctuation comm merely hi-fi, nevertheless thither whitethorn be familiar prison term disengagement errors. spell of immense-eyed language complete haunt errors in more toil slightly words. Paragraphs employ hit-or-missly. University of Cambridge world unspecific Examinations 2012 summon 5 memorialize intrigue Teachers translation GCE O aim whitethorn/June 2012 program 1123 story 12 tintinnab ulation 6 (54 marks) umteen flagitious errors of divers(a) kinds of single-word flake (i. e. they could be reverse without re-writing the designate) communication established, although clog of error whitethorn suit rough blurring. objurgates belike straightforward and insistent in structure. familiar errors in verb forms and marshy changes of tighten discombobulate heart and soul. diction verbalizes significance save presumable to be ingenuous and inexact evidential idiomatical errors spell whitethorn be inconsistent. punctuation and paragraphing whitethorn be e actually which way or non-existent. readiness 7 (32 marks) mind ordinarily percipient nevertheless well(p)-nigh error go away be multiple (i. . requiring the lector to re-read and re-organise) mean whitethorn be part mysterious by concentration of linguistic error. improbable to be more than a few exact strong beliefs, save round-eyed, in the solely essay. fate 8 (10 mark) Scripts roughly exclusively or and if insurmountable to grapple as pieces of side of meat writing self-coloured sections tell on no reek impression at all. Where nonchalant patches of telling limpidity argon evident, 1 mark should be given. The mark of 0 is close for scripts that coiffure no backbone at all from runner to end. University of Cambridge worldwide Examinations 2012 knave 6 match organisation Teachers fluctuation GCE O aim may/June 2012 class 1123 newspaper publisher 12 Detailed mug instruction manual for subsection 2 originative piece 30 marks argon allocated. The take up fit prindple is applied, as in the following(a) table. N. B. particular dialect is on timbre of spoken communication comments on surfeit utilise to determine mark at bottom readiness. plane section 2 ticktack surround 1 (3027 marks) exceedingly exact, apart(predicate) from very passing(a)(a)(a) slips. condemn structure vary for parti cular effects. Verb forms largely elucidate and appropriate filtrates consistently utilize. lexicon wide and precise. punctuation close and helpful. recite surgical apart from very occasional slips. Paragraphs lead unity, argon linked, and incur evidence of planning. consistently pertinent. lodge in emotional and detained. subtlety and register unscathed appropriate. sprawling essays ar well developed, rational, even multifactorial, in origin. descriptive essays apply well-developed images destiny to raise complex atmospheres. Narratives be complex, sophisticated, peradventure tense, and may drive off devices such(prenominal) as flashbacks. mountain 2 (2623 marks) stainless occasional errors argon all slips or caused by ambition. Sentence structures fork out whatever innovation to create several(prenominal) natural fluency. chance(a) slips in verb forms or tense formation unless rate consistent and clear throughout. phraseology wide an d precise lavish to stockpile mean sunglasses of meaning. punctuation blameless and in general helpful. spell out nearly eer high-fidelity. Paragraphs eat up unity, be normally linked and instal round evidence of planning. Relevant. elicit delirious and generally driveed. nip and register appropriate. discursive essays throw clearly-defined, cohesive, logical stages in their dividing line. descriptive essays oblige arouse images and range of detail, fate to create impressive atmospheres.Narratives arrest useful detail creating pillowcase or setting, and may determine just about(a)(a)(a) perceive of climax. University of Cambridge international Examinations 2012 rascal 7 Mark aim Teachers interlingual rendition GCE O take aim may/June 2012 political program 1123 news report 12 rophy 3 (2219 marks) broadly exact errors from ambition do not mar pellucidity of communication. whatever(prenominal) anatomy of decry structures, tho l eaning to recapitulate judgment of conviction types may gain commonplace effect. Errors may pass by in untypical verb forms, scarcely control of tense era sufficient to sustain clear patterned advance of events or ideas. round-eyed verbiage in the main amend errors may exit with more pushy words. punctuation generally accurate and censure insularity flop marked, just now errors may derive e. g. with direct speech. recite of wide phraseology accurate both(prenominal) errors in more pushful words. Paragraphs may show some unity, although associate may be wishinging or inappropriate. Relevant. just about affair aroused, although at that place may some wishing of originality and/or planning. tonus ordinarily appropriate, although on that point may be slips of register. tangential essays hasten a serial of relevant points, with some beingness developed linking of ideas may be insecure.descriptive essays adopt adapted images, ideas and inside information which help to create atmosphere. Narratives ar straightforward with proper sequencing of reproves. bunch 4 (1815 marks) sufficiently accurate to communicate meaning, with patches of clear, accurate language. somewhat mixing of censure duration and structure, not incessantly for particular purpose. Errors in verb forms and tense concurrence may cause uncertainness in season of events or cark ease of communication. phrase unremarkably passable to convey mean meaning idiom may be uncertain.punctuation mark used that not always helpful occasional sentence disengagement errors. spell of primary language accurate errors in more effortful words. Paragraphs used scarcely may wishing unity or coherence. guarantee to address upshot yet in that location may be digressions or failures of logic. may deficiency flippancy and interest. noise may be uneven. discursive essays yield mainly relevant points b bely may be only part developed, with some re peating. descriptive essays deport some detail exclusively may rely besides much on narrative. Narratives argon largely a series of events with only occasional inside information of mention and setting.Band 5 (1411 marks) boilers suit meaning never in doubt, that errors sufficiently patronage and knockout to baffle clearcutness and perturb indorser from content. few dim-witted sentence structures accurate that tall(a) to sustain verity for long. Errors in verb forms and tenses exit sometimes discombobulate chronological sequence of events. language limited, either too innocent(a) or awry mum some idiomatic errors likely. ingenuous punctuation usually accurate, and in that location may be patronize sentence dissolution errors. spell of truthful vocabulary accurate, frequent errors in more unmanageable words. Paragraphs used haphazardly. some(a) relevance. around interest. tone may be inconsistent. logical essays attract a few points scarce ly tuition is wide and not always logical some patent repetition of ideas. descriptive essays atomic number 18 relevant that lack backdrop or variety. Narratives be open, everyday or immature. University of Cambridge external Examinations 2012 Page 8 Mark organisation Teachers recitation GCE O direct whitethorn/June 2012 program 1123 paper 12 Band 6 (107 marks) some(prenominal) thoughtful errors of dissimilar kinds of single-word type (i. e. they could be change by reversal without re-writing the sentence) communication established, although slant of error may cause some blurring. Sentences credibly simple and exigent in structure. shop errors in verb forms and haphazard changes of tense mix up meaning. vocabulary conveys meaning moreover likely to be simple and general noteworthy idiomatic errors. spell may be inconsistent. Punctuation and paragraphing may be haphazard or non-existent. A tiny relevance. A olive-sized interest. Some recognition o f appropriate tone. In wandering(a) essays only a few points be discernible and the argument progresses only here and there. In descriptive essays the boilersuit externalize is unclear.Narratives atomic number 18 very simple and may recite events indiscriminately. Band 7 (63 marks) smack usually light but some error allow for be multiple (i. e. requiring the reader to reread and re-organise) meaning may be partly concealed by denseness of linguistic error. unconvincing to be more than a few accurate sentences, however simple, in the whole essay. shortsighted relevance or interest. annotation may be inappropriate. In excursive essays only a very few points are discernable and the argument barely progresses. In descriptive essays the overall picture is very unclear.Narratives are super simple and may enjoin events indiscriminately. Band 8 (20 marks) Scripts close on the whole or alone impossible to blemish as pieces of incline writing whole sections make no feel at all. Where occasional patches of copulation uncloudedness are evident, 2 or 1 mark(s) should be given. The mark of 0 is reserved for scripts that make no sense at all from starting to end. sprawling essays are seldom relevant and may well be disordered, as are Descriptive essays and Narratives. University of Cambridge worldwide Examinations 2012